The Dark Lord's initial displeasure

HB pencil + B5 pencil on A4 paper (smooth).

IT'S A LOOOOOONG COMMENT, BUT PLS, READ IT!
First of all, here goes a description of Snape subdued to the Cruciatus Curse I wrote ages ago, after reading "Harry Potter and The Half Blood Prince":

<<Completely unexpected, the Cruciatus Curse hit him, pain exploding behind his eyes at first and then extending to his face, his chest, his limbs, drowning him in waves of unbearable, blinding pain. His face a mask of sheer suffering.

The Curse was removed after a few moments. The Dark Lord looked at him impassively. -You disappoint me deeply, Severus.- said the monster after a while.

Every breath Snape drew in burned immensely and made ​​his head ache. Involuntary tears blurred his vision, but he dared not move a muscle, for fear of provoking another display of the wrath of Lord Voldemort.

The Dark Lord went to bend down on Snape, and whispered malevolently: -You too, Severus ... you thought I was finished.- The little color left on Snape's face left him immediately, as he heard his own voice answer: -No, my Lord.-

The Dark Lord drew himself up to his full height and silently cast the Cruciatus on Snape, who rolled over again, in an attempt to protect himself from the extreme suffering. The blind rage of the Dark Lord saw to it that the Cruciatus became even more powerful, vibrating with anger and loathing, overflowing with his greedy thirst for suffering. -You were such a promising servant.- said the voice, coldly.

With a clever flick of the wrist, the Dark Lord made the Cruciatus most intense yet. Snape yelped desperately. "I failed everyone..." he thought, through a haze of pain.

Only when Lord Voldemort gained full retribution, and Snape had invoked death in a shrill voice, with hot tears dripping along his cheekbones... only when the muscles and nerves did not stop to twitch and tremble, and the Dark Mark began to ooze blood, the Cruciatus Curse was lifted from the tortured body of Severus Snape.

The red eyes bore into the black ones. -Tell me, Severus, will you be the faithful servant that you have always been?- >>

I aplogize for any mistake I could have done in translating this piece, I hope it's understandable anyway!
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That being said...I'm sorry guys...there are so many things I really don't like about this piece. *sigh* You have no idea how many times I re-drew this one during the past weeks...trying hard to get him right. I wanted so bad to add a background, but I couldn't make it...I'm sorry! Some things are just meant to be left as they are, I guess...
I'm submitting this piece now beacuse I'm leaving soon, and it pains me to think I won't have enough time to draw for a while...
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